Monday, November 23, 2015

Colfax Walk Connection


I was walking down Colfax with my class

When I see a person looking at me

I was picking up trash and so was he

I was at a bus stop picking up a Doritos bag

He was picking up a two liter bottle and throwing it away

I wondered why he was picking up trash

I bet he was wondering the same for us

I think he was doing the same as us

Just trying to make a difference
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  1. UnknownDecember 1, 2015 at 8:08 AM

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  2. UnknownDecember 1, 2015 at 8:09 AM

    I like how you formatted your poem.

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  3. MilesDecember 1, 2015 at 3:57 PM

    I like that your poem creates a vivid image when you identify what the trash was.

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